I feel like your artwork is improving, I need to improve as well.
Edit: I really like how you depicted space with the background and this is just a nit pick but I don’t really like how thick the outline is.The outline isn’t that appealing to me. Nevertheless the light and shadow for this artwork is nice. Also I like how the flashlight or whatever gives a little lighting on Joel’s face and jacket. That’s all the feedback I have. I do and don’t like criticizing other peoples artwork online because it can go 2 ways. One way is that by criticizing someone’s artwork they can improve by keeping the criticism in mind and improving by watching out for the mistakes they were criticized on so they can make better art or they’ll just yell at you for hurting their so called feelings and tell other artists horrible things about you online ( I know this from experience). I know you wouldn’t do the second way.